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Caleb Reed's avatar

Hang in there Steve, Ethan has been through a lot but I'm sure he will be OK. Both characters are confused by their feelings but we only have Ethan's perspective. Eli clearly made a conscience choice to stop playing lacrosse before even meeting Ethan, if that gives you a sense of where his head is. Being in that world was a status symbol for Catherine, not Eli.

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David BW Vogel's avatar

Yeah—I’d say more that this is *real*. That I really care for these guys. Excellent writing!

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Caleb Reed's avatar

Thank you David!, it is meant to feel more real. I think many, if not most of us, have found ourselves in similar situations

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Steve Rentschler's avatar

This is depressing.

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