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R. Adrian Thorne's avatar

Excellent story, very character driven. Pacing is great, vibe is great, and the change in perspective is also well written.

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Caleb Reed's avatar

Thanks man!

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Mark Dean's avatar

The quiet build in the chaos...

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Caleb Reed's avatar

Love that - thank you. That's exactly the tension I am aiming for.

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Mark Dean's avatar

You do it the best

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