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R. Adrian Thorne ⏾⋆.˚'s avatar

Excellent story, very character driven. Pacing is great, vibe is great, and the change in perspective is also well written.

Caleb Reed's avatar

Thanks man!

Mark Dean's avatar

The quiet build in the chaos...

Caleb Reed's avatar

Love that - thank you. That's exactly the tension I am aiming for.

Mark Dean's avatar

You do it the best